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love does not get boring
nor does food ever get full
my biggest question is, "what's truly enough for you?"
life is a rollercoaster filled with ups and downs
do you choose now?
or wait for "fate" to come around?
Open your hearts and be guided by soul
we are all the same...
let us reach for that common goal
same old stories, same old lies
let us seek eternally
and open our eyes
Riches does not define success
it only makes us blind.
Seek your enlightenment
So you won't be left behind.
Share this moment with me, together we'll discover truth
ignore our differences
To the U.N.I.V.E.R.S.E we salute!
nor does food ever get full
my biggest question is, "what's truly enough for you?"
life is a rollercoaster filled with ups and downs
do you choose now?
or wait for "fate" to come around?
Open your hearts and be guided by soul
we are all the same...
let us reach for that common goal
same old stories, same old lies
let us seek eternally
and open our eyes
Riches does not define success
it only makes us blind.
Seek your enlightenment
So you won't be left behind.
Share this moment with me, together we'll discover truth
ignore our differences
To the U.N.I.V.E.R.S.E we salute!
a quick piece of writing before bedtime.
© 2009 - 2024 p0rkytso
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I really loved this peice. It has a great rhythm and the message just speaks to my heart. Acceptance and the ability to open one's eyes and truely see the world around them are both amazing qualities everyone should have and understand. This poem really captures that concept; another example of night as a muse leading to great works. The false (and true) rhymes add a good beat and complete each segement smoothly, and the rhythmic qualities of each line flow beautifully.
This was a great peice to read, and I can't wait to finish exploring your gallery to discover more wonderful peices like it! Let me know if you're going to write more, you obviously have some talent.
I really loved this peice. It has a great rhythm and the message just speaks to my heart. Acceptance and the ability to open one's eyes and truely see the world around them are both amazing qualities everyone should have and understand. This poem really captures that concept; another example of night as a muse leading to great works. The false (and true) rhymes add a good beat and complete each segement smoothly, and the rhythmic qualities of each line flow beautifully.
This was a great peice to read, and I can't wait to finish exploring your gallery to discover more wonderful peices like it! Let me know if you're going to write more, you obviously have some talent.